TheGhostOfMarz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Let it Go - Peach Farts]

the execution of the joke was....not very good....the art was...bad for almost the whole video....and it loops....but....the animation was not terrible...you stayed on model for the whole video even though....the art was....the way it was...but if you keep drawing the art will get waaay better....

[Joe ep1 good deeds part.1]

dude use a smaller brush size and animate at 24 fps on two's if you dont understand that than go watch harry's tutorials...or spaz's...because you have good posing just bad other parts...also work on foreshortening and perspective

[E3 2014 Roundup]

my first impression was that the voice acting was shit....but it was actually really well delivered...the jokes are spot on....it reminds me of a less stupid version of my first upload....

StomachBug responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[How to kill slender-short]

okay your interfacing was pretty cool...everything else.....not so much

[Kirby's Air Ride]

it was okay...but the animation was....weak...the story telling poses were fine but everything felt like it had the same light physics...nothing seemed to have any discernible weight...and not being a sound engineer has nothing to do with mixing sounds well...all of the sounds worked out...but all you have to do is know what to make quieter and what to make louder...since this is animation its all about the animation and the story...everything else can be a bit below par as long as you get the story across...and you did...but...not as good as you could have...for example when the care flips...it did not feel very strong or intense...

FleetAdmiralTony responds:

story? lol i didnt really intended to make one. but thanks...

[Awesome Players - Cartoon]

looks...interesting...but the voice acting is shitty....i'd love to see more with better voice acting...

[Sphexy Lady]

oh man...you were like really close to being one of my favorite animators....but both the characters were like....loose and floppy....it made the dude look kinda weird for a guy who thinks he can kill a wasp...but it was still okay...

[I hate you Zelda!]

Wow...this is really good...the running on the street looked a bit awkward...but the rest of the film is fantastic!

[Practicing the SFM:Basics]

this seems pretty interesting...it wasn't bad...but the way you fumbled over the guy who didn't like the plot was not the way to go about that...because everything here was pretty good and the voices were good too...but you really shouldn't try to defend anything....but instead make it better...and that doesn't mean promising a better plot...it means instead think of ways to reach that point were you and the person who thinks something was lacking are both satisfied...

still i hope to see more of your work...its solid....no issues or inconsistencies that are noticeable to me....the voices are fine and the jokes were not that bad....

McPhearson responds:

Thank you.

[Death Craft Anime fight]

Really well done....but An inconveniece to some...

The story flows really nicely...and the fight animation was solid(sometimes characters seemed like they had different laws of physics but not in the normal power based way) the tit were there and neither added or subtracted from the work...because...I'm a an adult...but they did create a bit of comic relief that saved the ending and quick (and close) camera cuts from being an issue...

there is an issue that became apparent immediately...My settings here on the site set .swf file as top priority and i had to watch a video file...meaning i had to wait to view most of it and then wait again to view more of it...its not like I didn't wait for it to load...because i did but the newgrounds player displays that it loaded everything then you have to wait...this made the film hard to access...I don't know what you made this in but if it was flash or toon boom or something you could have released a flash version (which still can have ads if that's an issue) because watching it in sections kills the story...